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4月6日雅思大作文解析：广告带来积极的经济效果还是会产生负面的社会影响，你怎么看待。

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雅思写作机经

2024年4月6日雅思大作文真题：

Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

有人说广告有积极的经济效果。其他人认为这会产生负面的社会影响，因为这会让人们对自己和所拥有的感到不满。讨论这两种观点，并给出自己的观点。

写作解析

本场考题完全重复2021年5月29号考场真题，再次印证了我们一直以来所秉持的雅思大作文话题/论点角度大量重复的观点；

作为双边观点讨论，第一方的角度比较大，可以写成两段缓解字数上的压力，但也可以在一段内给出更多不同角度列举的方式来给出更多语法的角度；

在第二方的部分要注意坏处必须从make people feel dissatisfied 部分出发，不能答例如过度消费资源浪费环境污染等方面。

写作范文

Without being noticed, advertisements seem to have become an integral part of our lives, with posters, billboards and screens. It is admitted that commercial advertising plays a vital part in boosting the economy. In contrast, we should also be cautious about the fact that the advertising business is naturally in opposition to personal satisfaction and aimed at raising anxieties.

The proponents would brag about the economic development launched by the advertisement industry. There is no denying that the advertising industry, as a matter of fact, should be recognized for its financial prominence. Besides the taxation paid and employment opportunities created, commercial advertising bridges the gap between consumers and producers, informing the former of numerous higher-quality and affordable commodities and offering the latter a much wider targeted audience to market. By linking the businesses with markets, commercial activities can be activated, and more revenues can be generated.

However, we should not neglect that, like many other media, advertising does impose threats on our mental well-being by intensifying our sense of anxiety. For ordinary people, it is natural to be unsatisfied with our exterior beauty, such as skin texture or hairstyles, when circumvented by cosmetic advertisements strategically featuring good-looking celebrities, and increasing reported numbers of plastic surgeries can be cited as compelling evidence. Besides, some luxuries, accessories or villas, are inextricably tied to social status and personal values. Unfortunately, working classes are equally exposed to such advertising, perhaps since a growing number of marketing staff are intended to cater to emotional fulfillment, like the sense of superiority of the wealthy. As a result, we could notice that more individuals are less content with their material possessions, leading to higher risks of antisocial behaviors.

In a nutshell, it is true that advertising has become an integral component of our economy and plays a vital role in social services, whereas we should bear in mind the fact that it may also cause social anxiety and place stricter regulations in case of detrimental mental impacts.